Parents: Chapter 21B (Why Polly?)

Polly and Casper

Re-using a pic from Chapter 6, but oh well 🙂

Hello all! This post was previously Chapter 21B, but has now been removed. But don’t despair! Why Polly? will soon be available in its entirety on Amazon.



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5 responses to “Parents: Chapter 21B (Why Polly?)

  1. Pingback: The Rajah and Maria: Chapter 21A (Why Polly?) | Stories and Stuff

  2. Alexia

    I’m sort of curious about the relationship Polly has with her sister. I mean, she hardly talks about her, it doesn’t seem like she really misses her, and yet she’s her only family, and apparently the one who raised her…


    • Hmmm, yes, I don’t really develop it much in this whole story. By the way, Gretchen is not related to Polly, she just took her in and raised her. I guess that’s why I didn’t think it was important to develop too much, but you’re right, Gretchen did raise her. I’ll have to think about whether to fix that 🙂


  3. Alexia

    Oh, I thought I remembered from the first chapters that she was her older sister… But I guess I imagined it lol. I guess it can’t hurt for the character to have some background story, but it’s good without it too 🙂


    • Yes, it’s always tricky to decide how much detail to give each character. I’ve actually cut some paragraphs where I described insignificant characters with too much detail, because if someone reads that they’re going to think that character will do something important later, when they won’t. 🙂


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