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Fading Summer Days: Chapter 23A (Why Polly?)

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To Help An Enemey: Chapter 22B (Why Polly?)

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Back at Court: Chapter 22A (Why Polly?)

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An Opening to Intrigue You

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In the land of Ingary, where such things as seven-league boots and cloaks of invisibility really exist, it is quite a misfortune to be born the eldest of three.

- Howl’s Moving Castle (yes, again)

 I love this opening because it establishes so clearly that this novel is going to poke fun at fairy-tales. The eldestof three? Isn’t that the one who’s supposed to fail “first and worst” in all the stories you’ve ever heart?

 

Novel openings are so important because they are what’s going to draw you in, and tell you what kind of book this is going to be. As much as I love reading, I have to admit I’m always nervous when starting a new book. I never know if I’ll like the characters, or if I can trust the author. So an opening that invites me in and makes me comfortable is essential to me.

By the way, here’s a neat list of clever openings lines that I found online the other day. Not sure if the analysis of why the lines work is always spot on – you can’t always explain the magic of words in words – but it’s fun to read, anyway. Plus, Jane Austen makes the list.


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The Rajah and Maria: Chapter 21A (Why Polly?)

The Story So Far: Polly, a princess, an Enchanter, and his apprentice discover they are all are being threatened by a malevolent magical being known as a jadess. Can Polly get along with the arrogant enchanter long enough to figure out how to survive with a jadess after them? Can she avoid embarrassment at court long enough to prevent the jadess from controlling the Rajah? And … what does the jadess want with Polly? Chapter 1 is here.

Chapter 21A: The Rajah and Maria

I was about to go crazy from boredom, even though Paulina had depleted Casper’s meagre library and piled it beside my bed, and I’d improved my strategy at Chaldean sevenfold by playing against myself all afternoon. Then Stefan dragged himself in after his day at court, and after him Casper strode in triumphantly.

“The Rajah’s coming to the Peak tomorrow,” he said. “So we don’t need to send anyone to court.”

“So that’s why you went out,” I said. He grinned.

“How’d you manage that?” Paulina asked. She had Radagast at her feet and was absentmindedly patting his reddish-gold fur.

“I said I was going to discuss plans for my next project with him,” he replied. “I can probably make him stay all day.” He looked thoughtful. “Maybe a couple days.”

I went to bed that night feeling better. But when I woke up the next morning I was coughing things up out of my lungs, and my legs still felt like jelly. And my nose still was red and running.

“I don’t think I’ll ever get better,” I sighed over my breakfast.

“Wouldn’t that be a pity,” said Casper. I looked at him suspiciously. “Well, at least we’ve got the Rajah safe for a little while.”

The Rajah arrived in a magnificent coach, with all the pomp and glory suiting a ruler visiting his Royal Advisor. Then I heard Casper was planning to talk to him in the kitchen.

“No!” I screeched. “I’m in here!” It would be embarrassing to appear in front of the Rajah in my nightgown, with my nose so red. But Casper only laughed.

“Where do you want me to bring him?” he asked. “Into my workshop?” And he went out into the entrance hall to receive his visitor. I snuggled as far down into my blankets as I could, so my nightgown was completely covered, and the quilt came up over my nose. Not that my nightgown was in any way indecent – it was actually quite pretty. But still, it was a nightgown.

“Oh, she’s sleeping,” Casper said, amusement ringing out plainly in his voice as he showed his visitor into the room. “I guess you’ll have to ask her how she is later.” Then they sat down at the table, over cups of tea, and talked about things so boring it put me to sleep for real. Most of it was just perfunctory politeness, and it tired me to listen to it.

When I woke up again Casper was outlining his plan for irrigation canals. I wondered if he was actually planning to build them, or if he was just talking to keep the Rajah there. There was no visible animosity between them, as might be expected, but they certainly didn’t look like what could be called friends. They were two entirely different kinds of men. And each of them was used to getting his own way.

Stefan came in, and asked me if I’d like to go outside and lie out there for a little while. I nodded. So, after I gave me greeting to the Rajah, I went outside and watch Stefan, Paulina and Radagast from where I lay, chasing butterflies, balls, and each other. Then sunlight fell on my face, and I realized I’d missed the heat of it.

I could tell Stefan was glad he did not have to go to court today. He seemed cheerful, and full of energy. I watched them and wished I was not sick.

Slowly, over the next couple of days, I began getting better, but colds can be awfully stubborn. Each day Maria would come to check on me, and after she’d left the Rajah would come. Casper was skilled at managing to keep him safely in the Peak. I would either lie in the kitchen and listen to them talk, or go with Paulina and Stefan. I thought it was the stupidest thing in the world that Casper would receive the ruler of Chaldea in the kitchen, but Casper asked why not, and the Rajah didn’t object.

“Besides, it wasn’t a kitchen until you came,” he told me. “I’d always received the Rajah in here before. He said he liked the distinctive Angarian style.”

“Oh, well blame it on me,” I replied. But I was teasing, since I was feeling so good that morning.

Sometimes Maria could be convinced to stay when the Rajah was there, and then we’d all have rather interesting discussions. Casper liked it when this happened because then he didn’t have to make up things to say to the Rajah anymore.

 “The state of the aristocracy is deplorable,” Maria insisted one day. “We are teetering on the brink of utter ruin, but change our habits – oh no, we cannot do that. Our social standing would be imperiled, claim the fools.”

“A certain show of wealth is at times necessary for –“ began the Rajah.

“Is it?” Maria asked. “Is it really? Would not the lower classes appreciate us more if we prevent the country from sinking into poverty, than to know our reckless spending brought them to such a place?”

“It is difficult to change people’s minds,” the Rajah replied.

“Oh yes, and the lords’ and earls’ minds most of all!”

Casper raised his eyebrows at me. I stifled a giggle.

“And consider, what will become of the aristocracy if we do go into financial ruin? Our exports are worth less and less every year. Soon our precious estates will produce exports worth precisely nothing at all. How long would those lords and earls last if they had to work among the labouring classes?”

“They are unused to working for their living,” the Rajah agreed.

“So, it’s a matter of either preparing them to work in their future, or returning the League of Enchanters to us.” Maria shook out her long red hair.

“It is never so simple,” the Rajah grumbled, clearly trying to imagine either convincing the earls that they could do manual labour, or actually humbling himself enough to apologize to Sabea and get in their good graces again.

“Truly limitless reform she is proposing,” Casper muttered to me.

“You don’t agree?” I asked.

“Oh, she has probably hit on the path that will be most pragmatic for Chaldea,” he replied. “It is quite true, the League of Enchanters has always been linked to Chaldea’s economic well-being. But to rescue the earls and lords now would teach them precisely nothing.

“Of course,” he added with a grin, “they would actually have to oppress the peasantry to cause a revolution, and so far they have not done that. Merely flaunted their riches, as you have seen.

I thought about all my friends at court, and shuddered at the thought of bloody revolutions such as I had heard of in Sabea happening here.

“You think revolutions are necessary?” I whispered.

“Just sadly inevitable, if oppression occurs,” he replied. “And very rarely beneficial for anyone, as large numbers of everyone die. I would refuse any service to the Rajah at all, however he imprisoned me, if I thought a pragmatic approach to Chaldea hurt the workers more than it helped.

And I was reminded he’d seen far more countries and situations than I had ever dreamed of seeing. I wondered what he thought of Angaria’s king, who had always been very popular among the people I’d lived among.

Just then the door to the kitchen burst open and Paulina stumbled in, followed by Radagast and Stefan. Radagast immediately began growling at the two strangers, and Stefan had to haul him out.

Paulina just stood frozen in the doorway, and I remembered she was supposed to be staying out of the way of the Rajah.

She was dressed in her Chaldean robes and didn’t have a hint of a royal robe or a crown about her. But she was so distinctively the Angarian princess. After all, I had been able to recognize what I thought was her while she peered out of a coach at me sprawled on the cobblestone road.

Casper cleared his throat. But it was Maria who saved us by reaching to rest her hand over the Rajah’s.

“You realize I do not mean to hurt you, Rinaldo, but I worry about our country as much as you do.”

Casper and I were waving frantically at Paulina to back out of the room. She was mouthing, “I thought he was gone!”

The Rajah glanced over his shoulder at Paulina, then down at Maria’s hand on his own. I abruptly stopped waving, and grabbed Casper’s waving arm too, before the Rajah noticed our wild motioning.

Had he seen too much? The Rajah had certainly had a good chance to see every inch of Paulina before she’d backed away…

“Your loyalty is admirable, Maria. I do not doubt you for a moment.”

And his gaze rested on her face for many minutes longer than he had spent looking at Paulina. Casper moved to say something, but I elbowed him. This might be Maria’s chance.

Maria’s eyelashes fluttered. Neither of them pulled their hands away. Huh, maybe the Rajah did need a robe and a crown to recognize Paulina after all.

Then he abruptly stood up. “Well, Casper, I believe we have much business to attend to.” He glanced at Maria. “Perhaps I shall see you again at court someday soon.”

“Yes, perhaps,” she said softly, studying her hand where it now rested on the empty armrest of the chair he had been sitting in.

Wow, some men were blind.

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Delivery of Flowers: Chapter 20A (Why Polly?)

The Story So Far: Polly, a princess, an Enchanter, and his apprentice discover they are all are being threatened by a malevolent magical being known as a jadess. Can Polly get along with the arrogant enchanter long enough to figure out how to survive with a jadess after them? Can she avoid embarrassment at court long enough to prevent the jadess from controlling the Rajah? And … what does the jadess want with Polly? Chapter 1 is here.

Chapter 20: Delivery of Flowers

I did get sick. I woke up the next morning with a headache and a fever, and my legs shook like crazy when I stood up. I heard a knock on my door and called out to Maria to come in. She looked worried when she saw me.

“Oh Polly, are you sick?” she asked, coming towards me and laying a hand on my forehead. Her hand felt pleasantly cool. “You are! You must go and lie down, I don’t know what you’re going to do, but you certainly can’t go to court. I’ll go tell the Enchanter.”

“Oh, but I have to!” I cried. I kept standing up, even though my legs quivered like jelly beneath me. This was terrible. The jadess could do so much if I was gone.

Instantly I felt ashamed of how lax I had been lately. How many times had I let the Rajah out of my sigh, or had forgotten to watch him? Not too many, but half the time I had nearly forgotten why I was at court, with all the court intrigues going on around me. I had no idea of who the jadess could be yet, or if she was even at court. It gave me a sick feeling in my stomach, on top of the nausea that was already there.

“Nonsense,” said Maria. “The court can get on without you.” I’d forgotten she didn’t know my real pretence. I struggled uselessly, as she firmly pushed me back to my bed.

“Please,” I said, “I’ll be fine after breakfast. Just let me go down and eat something.”

She stepped back and surveyed my cotton and lace nightgown. “Well, you’re decent at least. Maybe you should go down and have little breakfast, but I don’t think you should go to court today.”

So I dizzily and shakily made my way down all the steps to the first floor kitchen, and collapsed in a chair by the fire. Paulina was making breakfast, but she stopped when she saw me.

“Oh Polly, you look terrible!” she cried. “It must be from the rain last night. If Casper makes you go to court today I’ll – I don’t know what I’ll do!”

I laughed weakly at her attempts to be fierce. She was such a pretty, dainty, blond little princess it really was quite comical.

I gave her the same spiel about being fine after breakfast, but I think she believed it even less than Maria had. And I wasn’t sure I believed it either. It took inhuman effort to keep myself sitting upright in my chair.

Then Casper came in, all dressed for court.

“Polly, you’re sick,” he said accusingly.

“Not really,” I protested weakly.

“Go right back up to bed,” he ordered, “Before you collapse, or get the rest of us sick.”

“But – what about the court?” I asked him, feeling surprised.

“We’ll figure something out,” he replied. “Now go upstairs.”

“Please,” Paulina said. “I think she’d be more comfortable if I just made a bed up down here. And it would be easier for us to take care of her.”

Casper shrugged and threw up his hands. “You women do what you want. It’s only my house.”

I smiled weakly at Paulina. I certainly didn’t relish the idea of lying on the third floor all by myself all day.

Then Maria came in. She faced the Enchanter on her tiptoes, so she could look him in the eye, and began bullying him to let me stay home, until Paulina told her I already was. Then she helped Paulina make up a bed for me in the kitchen.

“You know, we were so worried yesterday,” Maria said, tucking the sheets in around me. The bed felt heavenly. “When we arrived at the stables and saw Shenaira without a rider we didn’t know what to think. The whole court was frantic. They were all certain you had fallen off, but I knew you had been keeping your seat well the whole ride there, so I feared worse things. Then the Enchanter turned up, and he told us he was going to look for you, starting with the streets of Araba.”

“I’m sorry,” I murmured. “It was stupid of me.” My eyes drifted shut.

“Oh, I’m not blaming you,” said Maria. “It wasn’t your fault.”

I drifted into a restless sleep after that. When I woke up Maria had left, and it was still rather early in the morning. Casper was sitting with his feet up on the table (he would persist in doing that!) and Paulina was washing up. She turned to me.

“I’ve got breakfast for you, if you can stomach it,” she said.

I struggled into a half-sitting position. Come to think of it, I was hungry. I wasn’t sick to my stomach, I just had a miserable cold.

She brought me orange juice, gruel and some figs. I began eating it, wincing when food touched my sore throat, and feeling my head pounding between my ears. I felt so sick, but it was nice to eat.

“So, is the jadess having a field day while I’m lying here?” I asked.

“No,” said Casper. “I sent Stefan to court. Some desperate question on magical matters pertaining to the kingdom needing an answer from the Rajah, but if Stefan’s clever he’ll manage to stay there all day.”

I relaxed a little, relieved at that. I’d managed to finish my breakfast, and Paulina took the tray away.

It was so comfortable to lie there, in the Angarian-style kitchen I’d been missing without realising it. I really hadn’t realised how exhausting court had been, and how much it had changed my routine. I soon felt as if I’d hardly ever left, but I wondered how Paulina, Stefan, and the Enchanter felt. They’d probably all gotten into their own little routine without me, and I’d disrupted it. Especially Stefan’s having to intrude at court all day!

About mid-morning Paulina picked up a basket and told me she was going to market. I wondered at her going alone, but she seemed used to it by now. Casper went into his workshop then too, leaving me all alone.

I’d forgotten how boring it was to be sick. I lay, flat on my back, staring at the ceiling, too tired to do anything but desperately bored doing nothing. The painful ache was more miserable now in the back of my throat, and I had nothing to take my mind off it. Basically, there was nothing to do but sleep, and I can only do that for a couple minutes at a time. I envied Paulina, who could just leave.

Faraway in the depths of the house I could hear the ticking of the clock Paulina and I had wound up the day we’d searched the whole house for the object Casper’s magic might come from. At first it was nice, because it broke the silence and kept me from going crazy, but after a while the ticking itself began driving me crazy. I sneezed violently into my handkerchief. The only good thing about having the clock wound up was that I could keep track of time if I counted the rings.

But my! time went by so slowly!

I had a book, but my arms soon tired of holding it up, and my eyes ached from reading it. Irritably I put it down. In the workshop adjacent to the kitchen I could faintly hear the Enchanter moving around, and I wondered what he was doing. Radagast padded in to check on me once, then padded back out again.

That was too bad. I would have welcomed the company.

Then there was a rap on the door. At first I thought it was Paulina, but I realised she would have just walked in. Casper poked his head out of his workshop and looked at me.

“Can’t you get it?” he asked. “Well, I guess not.” Sighing, as if to say ‘look how much work you’re putting me through!’ he went out into the entrance hall. I snorted after him. Still looking for sympathy, and who was the sick one?

I heard a muffled conversation, and then he came back. Well, it was slightly hard to tell, because he was almost completely covered in a bouquet of roses, but I was sure it was him. The roses were pink and rather clashed with his hair.

“Get-well-flowers,” he said from underneath them. “Where do you want them?”

I stared at them. “Um, on the table, I guess. Are they really for me?”

“Do you see anyone else sick in this house?” he asked. “Ouch!” A rose had stabbed him, and a drop of blood formed on his finger.

“Quit whining,” I said. “You’re an Enchanter. Heal it.”

“You still don’t understand magic, do you,” Casper replied, shaking his head. “It can be a force to move and build things. And it can be solidified, to create things, but the solidification has to be maintained. Now,” he held up his finger, “I could create a piece of skin to fix this, but I’d either have to maintain it for the rest of my life, or I’d have to take it off someday and leave it to heal on its own. And I’m telling you, the more things you’re maintaining at the moment, the harder it is to do new magic.”

“Oh,” I said. I looked at the flowers. They really were beautiful.

“Who’re they from?” I asked. Casper threw the card at me.

“Carmen!” I said. “Maria must have told her I was sick. She says she was very glad to hear I got home safely, and she hopes I’ll enjoy the roses.”

You might, but I’m not,” Casper replied, sucking his bleeding finger with an almost sulky expression on his face. I laughed.

“Well, she didn’t send them to you, did she?” I said.

Paulina came back from market, and exclaimed over my roses. Then she put her purchases away and began putting the flowers in water so they’d keep longer. She was more skilled at handling them than Casper, because she didn’t get pricked once.

Casper went out somewhere then, and Paulina made me some chicken broth. It was very good, but not exactly like Gretchen used to make for me when I’d gotten sick before. I finished it all off and smiled at her.

“I would say you officially know how to cook,” I told her.

“Well, I’m getting lots of practice now that you’re not here so often,” she replied. “But I’m not sure I like doing it all the time, like you do. Though I think if I ever get back to Angaria I’ll cook myself, however un-princesslike it is, every once in a while.”

“You do that,” I laughed. “Shock the pompous court out of their wits.”

She smiled and had started washing up my bowl and spoon when there was another knock on the door. So she went to get it. When she came back she had a large bouquet of tiger lilies in her hands.

“Well, look at this,” she said. “It’s from Earl Hearn. He hopes you get well soon too.”

Not long after that the door was rapped again. This time Paulina came back with hibiscus, from Earl Seanit. Soon the kitchen was crowded with flowers from my well-wishers, roses and violets, gladiolas and lilies, carnations, tulips, lotus flowers and orchids. The tallest one was an arrangement of hollyhock and spiky leaves, and the largest was an arrangement of yellow lilies from Lady Indira. There was a large assortment of roses, mostly from the earls, and some rather spectacular pansies. The kitchen was beginning to look like a jungle.

“They’re all so beautiful,” I murmured, smelling a bouquet of purple roses. It surprised me the court all thought so well of me. Not surprisingly there was none from Cassandra, but rather surprisingly some of Mandarine’s group had sent their well-wishes. I was not sure whether that was because they liked me, even though I was on Carmen’s side, or if it was because they wanted me back at court they could continue plaguing me, or if they were only doing it because the rest of the court was.

Paulina came back into the kitchen from answering the door. “Well, someone’s slightly more creative,” she said. She was holding a cut-glass bowl full of brilliant water lilies I opened the card.

“It’s from the Rajah,” I said. “How nice of him.” Somehow I just couldn’t think of him as Rinaldo.

There was no room on the table for the display, so Paulina squished it onto the mantle beside Earl Seanit’s hibiscus. It made Earl Laftan’s orchids look in danger of falling off the other end, but there was no other place for them.

The door was rapped again, and Paulina sighed. But it was not more flowers at the door, only Maria come to visit me. She looked relieved when she heard the Enchanter was out. They were civil to each other, but she certainly didn’t like him much.

“Oh, how nice,” she said when she saw my array of bouquets. “Are they all from the court?”

“Yes,” I nodded. “If you see any of them, please tell them thanks.”

Paulina offered her tea and spicy cakes, but Maria declined. Since Maria was now there to keep me company Paulina decided to get out and play ball with Radagast. Maria and I were left facing each other.

“Did you go to court today?” I asked. She shook her head.

“Only to tell them you were sick,” she replied.

I reached out to straighten an arrangement of lotus flowers that was within arms reach of my bed.

“It was nice of the court to send me flowers,” I said. “But –“ I hesitated and looked at Maria. I didn’t want to sound rude.

“I mean, I’ve always heard Chaldea has had hard times since the League of Enchanters left,” I continued. “But when I go to court there’s all these jewels, fancy dresses, finery… And now they’ve all sent me flowers. I used to be a flower girl, you know, I know all these would cost a lot.”

Maria snorted. “That’s the court ladies for you! They never bother their pretty little heads with finances, so how could they be expected to know? Half their families are barely making it now-a-days as it is, and yet they spend money like water!”

“That’s why,” she looked at me, “It would be such an unsuitable match if the Rajah were to marry one of them.”

She got up and paced the room, around the flower-laden table. “And the earls aren’t much better. Most of the young ones are spoiled sons, whose fathers just give them what they want. And the older ones are too pompous to see what’s in front of their faces. Since the time of the Rajah’s grandfather things have been going downhill, because the magic that was maintaining them was taken away, and this whole country’s getting poorer. But does the court see that?”

“I was right then,” I said. “I told the Rajah Chaldea needed the League of Enchanters.”

“Does it ever!” Maria exclaimed. “I tell you, when I’m the Rajah’s wife I’ll do my best to re-establish it. We need it, it’s absolutely plain. One blasted Enchanter certainly can’t do it all.”

I looked at her. She was completely self-assured as she spoke.

“Do you love the Rajah?” I asked.

“Yes,” she replied. I’d half expected her to be as cynical about love as Janeira, but I was glad she was not.

“I think relations with Sabea could be restored,” she continued, softer. “Ties between our countries have always been strong. All we need to do is humble ourselves a bit.”

I watched her. “You could do it,” I said. “I can see you doing it.”

She let out a long sigh. “I have remained away from court for – what, a month now? And when I returned to ride with you to Benishada, the Rajah greeted me as if we had seen each other yesterday. I do not believe – he notices whether I am there or not.”

I stared at her. “So that is why you are re-ordering your estate.”

“Yes,” she said, staring at the explosion of flowers sitting on the table. “Yes, that is why I am…”

I swallowed a reply to that, because I was not sure she wanted to hear reassurances from the girl who had received a boatload of flowers, including some from the Rajah, after only one day missing from court.

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At Benishada: Chapter 18B (Why Polly?)

A chapter in which Polly must prove her worth without making a fool of herself, yet again.
The Story So Far: Polly, a princess, an Enchanter, and his apprentice discover they are all are being threatened by a malevolent magical being known as a jadess. Can Polly get along with the arrogant enchanter long enough to figure out how to survive with a jadess after them? Can she avoid embarrassment at court long enough to prevent the jadess from seducing the Rajah? And … what does the jadess want with Polly? Chapter 1 is here.

Chapter 18B: At Benishada

 It seemed all the court had finally arrived, and we started to arrange ourselves into companies. Maria was up front, in a group with the Rajah, so I stayed behind with Janeira and Earl Seanit and Earl Parfin. Then, as if by some unspoken signal, everyone mounted and began moving off.

I took a deep breath and heaved myself up. Fortunately Shenaira did not budge. It took me at least ten minutes to arrange my skirts, and then my hat so I could see, and by that time most of the group was ahead of me.

Thankfully I had ridden before, and side-saddle too, but the reins on my horse were slightly different than what I was used to and it took a little while to sort them out. Gently I urged Shenaira to catch up with the rest, and let out a breath when I remained seated as she walked. I could do this. I would ride her gracefully, with my peacock blue skirts spread out over her back, the feathers on my hat bobbing as we walked, and looking as lady-like as possible. I had been doing precious little of that lately.

I wanted Maria to see her lessons for me had paid off. Though I had still taken my rapier, strapped to my girdle under my skirts.

We rode through Araba, which was mostly awake at this time, its people gaping at the courtly group riding through. I could see the Rajah up ahead, nodding graciously to them and acting exactly like a ruler should. He looked so regal astride his noble black stallion.

Then we turned east, the opposite way of the Falls of Araba, and up a riding path that wound through the mountains. It was quite a pleasant path, with emerald green trees over-shadowing it and birds-of-paradise calling in the trees. It was not yet hot, as it was still morning, but the buttery sunshine still filtered down through the leaves and lit on me pleasantly. The horses’ coats glowed in it. Their walk was a soft, easy walk they seemed able to keep up for hours, and alternately their necks would stretch and arc, and shake out their manes from under the reins that held them In check. It wasn’t at all uncomfortable for their rider, even if they were riding side-saddle, but pleasantly rocking and soothing.

Okay, so it was probably entirely due to the horses that Chaldean women could ride them in these get-ups. I was keeping my seat, amazingly enough.

“Have you been to Benishada before?” I asked Janeira as we rode.

She shook her head. “My family – is not the most prominent. We have never been invited. But now, when I have been introduced at court…”

“Well, I can see why the court likes to go,” I said. “The ride there itself is nice enough. Does the Lord Benishada often go to court?”

“No, never,” Janeira replied. “The court comes to him. He is an uncle to the Rajah, the former Rajah’s younger brother, and thus was installed as Lord of Benishada. The Rajah himself has a summer-home there, which he sometimes stays at. But not this year.”

The Chaldeans were mainly good horsemen, except Janeira, who seemed ill at ease on a horse, and whose horse seemed ill at ease with her. I urged my horse gently past her, and glanced ahead. Maria was riding up front with the Rajah.

A smile crossed my face. Good.

The Rajah and I were on slightly better terms now. The fact that I had apologised, and he had apologised, for injuring each other’s pride, helped a lot. At court we sometimes would talk, though now I did not feel like urging my horse into the gallop necessary to pass everyone else and reach the Rajah. But I could see the Rajah up there, and Maria there. It was obvious Maria had known him for a very long time, because it looked like she was being nearly as impertinent to him as I had been. They must have been very good childhood friends.

Finally, after riding through many vales between the mountains, the gates of Benishada came in sight.

It was up on a plateau, with a path switching back and forth to wind up the slope to its gates, which stood imposing above us. Villains used to be more plentiful on Chaldean roads, and Benishada’s gates had been built to prevent any entry by them.

The horses went up the slope easily, though I was sweating a little as I reached the top. The sun was climbing high in the sky, and it was almost noon.

Maria rode back to me when we reached the gates. She still looked wonderfully glamorous and cool in her white dress.

“So, what do you think of it so far?” she said.

“I have barely seen it yet,” I replied. “But it is – imposing, I suppose.”

“Technically the estate is owned by the Rajah,” she said, “And if he did not have so much business at the Palace, this would be his home. As it is, he lets his uncle, Lord Benishada, take care of it. This has been the traditional home of his dynasty for centuries.”

Her eyes sparkled. “You will see why so many women dream of what it would be like to be mistress of Benishada!”

I soon agreed with her. The grounds of it were breath-takingly beautiful –natural, yet clearly well-cared-for. Along the avenue massive oaks lifted their trunks, seeming to stretch hundreds of feet up, their trunks nearly black and far above topped with a cloud of pale green. But as we drew closer to the manor the natural beauty gave way to velvet smooth lawn.

The manor was a warm ochre colour, flat-roofed, with many windows. It had one great dome and two smaller ones, and at the corners stood short, squat and square towers. Thick wooden doors of brown-black were flung open to welcome us.

There were peacock strolling around, like at the Palace, and monkeys, and pure-blooded dogs, but it had an air of grace and tranquillity the Palace did not have. It had stood much longer than the Palace, and against much more.

At the entrance stood a group of people, like Benishada’s own mini-court, to welcome us. A few of them were groomsmen, and occupied themselves with taking our horses when we dismounted, but the others were nobles, and the fierce, strong and dark, aristocratic man standing at their head had to be the lord. He was older, but he bore a striking resemblance to the Rajah.

“Well, sire,” he said, and bowed lowly and nobly, somehow losing none of his fierceness as he did so, “Welcome to your ancient home.” He had a jutting beard streaked with gray, and a hawk-like nose.

“Greetings, uncle,” the Rajah replied, raising him up from his bow, “I am glad to be at Benishada again.”

Our horses were led away in a long line to the stables at the back, and the court went on forward up to the entrance of the manor. Janeira began hurriedly whispering to me who the others with the Lord of Benishada were. She had never been here before, but she must have heard of them all her life, unlike me.

“That must be the lord’s wife, Lady Perdita,” she said, pointing to the tall woman with hair almost completely gray pinned up in a bun at the nape of her neck. She stood haughtily beside the lord. “And those must be their daughters. Yes, there’s all five of them. And there’s the son, Ben-al-Tur, perhaps you’ve heard of him. He’s quite a famed swordsman. And that woman there, she must be Shuriam, Benishada’s keeper of the keys.”

The daughters were all dark, like their father and like their cousin, and they called greetings to some of us, whom they seemed to know well. They were all rather handsome, with raven-dark hair. Their brother, Ben-al-Tur, stood across from them, dressed in crimson with a rapier sheathed at his waist. I noticed the circlet of emeralds embedded on it. A sword-master.

The lord and his lady stood at the entrance, welcoming each of the court members. I did a deep curtsy. The Lord of Benishada smiled a little when he saw me.

“Fair hair,” he said. “You must be the cousin of the Enchanter. Why else would an Angarian be here?”

“Yes, indeed, my lord,” I replied. I hoped he had not heard too much about my escapades.

On the terrace an elaborate luncheon had been prepared for us. At the front there was set up a high table, for, as Janeira explained, those ‘of the blood’ (those with royal blood). It was as fancy as any lunch at the Palace. We had a soup of shellfish imported from the sea to start off with, followed by a tomato ice, the assorted salads and greens and sliced roots, then a cooling, almost minty sort of ice. After that there was mutton and venison, and slices of pork with apples, round wafers with butter, and towering heaps of biscuits. By our plates were tall goblets of frosty nectar. I was glad I had finally figured out all the court rules for mannerly eating, and need not make a fool of myself at Benishada too.

“That was nice,” I said to Janeira when we were done. Most of the court was relaxing at this time, before the long ride home again, but we were strolling through the gardens. The mountain plateau made a wonderful place for growing vegetations, and we went around and admired it.

When we got back to the manor the rest of the court was strolling around too, conversing in little groups. Ben-al-Tur stood on the steps of the manor, and when he saw us he came over.

“Lady Penelope,” he said, and I suppressed a wince. I really was sick of that name. He stopped in front of us and we paused in our strol, I watching him and wondering what he could want.

“My cousin, the Rajah,” he said, “Told me that after duelling with rapiers for barely more than a month, you have managed to beat him already. I do not believe it. I told him he is partial to you because you are a blond Angarian, and that I could beat you with one hand tied. Would you allow me to give a demonstration?”

I eyed him coldly. He stood arrogantly, fingering his rapier at his side, his black hair styled into a large pompadour over his forehead. I decided I wanted to fight him, if only to mess that pompadour up.

“I will,” I said, “I but do not bother tying your hands. I want it to be fair fight, and besides, of how much use is it to have two hands in duelling?”

He smirked. “Of much use. But – as you wish. I will give you as much time to get ready as you need.”

I hurried towards the manor, muttering to myself and wishing I’d brought my rapier clothes. But at least I could take my hair down, and make sure my rapier was sharp.

Maria caught up to me. “So,” she said. “You are the fight the Swordsman. Do you have your rapier clothes? Because if you don’t Tyresa Benishada said she would lend you some. She would like her brother taken down a notch, and so would I, he is altogether too contemptuous of women’s duelling. Just because he’s a real Swordsman! I tell you, I have duelled him many times, and have come as close as you possibly can to beating him, yet he still looks down on my skill.”

I stared at her. “But if you can’t beat him, how can I?”

“I have faith in you, Tigress,” she said. “If you hit your flow you’re ten times better than me, though you have less experience.”

I borrowed Tyresa’s rapier clothes and put them on. Looking in the mirror I put my hands on my hips and studied myself. I did not look fierce at all, just a pale, long-nosed Angarian, more like a woman out to snag herself a husband than a swords-maiden, whatever the fact I was wearing pants.

Ben-al-Tur seemed to think so too, and looked at me contemptuously. Beside me Maria clapped my shoulder for luck. She was muttering to herself.

“So you didn’t want him to tie his hands, did you?” she said. “Watch out, his hands are dangerous. But I would not want him to tie his hands either, so if I did beat him he would not have an excuse.”

We faced each other. My palms were slick with sweat and slippery on the handle of my rapier. I gripped it tightly and stared at him.

“So, Tigress,” he sneered. “We will duel.”

His jab-thrust after our bow was even quicker than the Rajah’s had been. It was only by turning quickly that I managed to make him nick my shoulder and not the white patch on my chest. He laughed.

“A little – too fast – for you?” he said amusedly, jabbing left and right as he spoke. I immediately went on the defensive. But he was good, and I was using so much of my concentration on my blocks that I had not the time to study him for openings so I could go on the offensive. I was biting my lip and whipping my rapier in a silver whirl, tasting blood in my mouth. He was coolly staring me down and laughing softly.

And yes, he was good. The earls that had taught me were nothing to this. Maria was nothing to this. It was only by some inner instinct I was able to block his relentless attack, I had to rely on every quick reflex I had. And I could only defend. It was a good thing I did not tire easily, for all I could do was hang on and hope for an opening.

“Ah, lucky one,” Ben-al-Tur said, as my rapier whipped his out of the way. I took a breath and hoped he would pause, but he did not, and only pressed me harder.

“I think perhaps what they call your skill should really be ascribed to luck,” he said. I growled in my throat and fought off another attack. He continued speaking. “Though you are one of the fiercest fighters I’ve ever met – Tigress.”

He nicked my shoulder, and I just had a chance to see a dribble of blood run down it before he attacked again. Tyresa’s rapier clothes were being cut to shreds. Everywhere he was piercing through my defences, but I grimly kept up in spite of the now-ragged edges of my clothes, because my white patch had not yet been touched. But I was quite sure that was only because the Swordsman was playing with me, intent on utterly humiliating my skill.

A tide of anger rose in me at the thought.

“Women should not become sword-maidens,” he told me.

I did not answer.

“They do not have grit enough,” he continued. “The only skills they need are basic protection, and they need not fancy themselves anything more than that. Lady Penelope.”

He called me that deliberately, indicating I did not deserve such a title as Tigress, I was such a poor sword-maiden. But I hated the name Penelope, and instead of shaming me it only made me infuriated.

Then, as my tide of anger rose higher, something clicked in my brain again. Ben-al-Tur might still have been speaking, but everything beyond our two swords was a blank. I could see, almost as if I was detached from it, the Swordsman’s many attacks, and my poor defences. Anger heated my face. Of course he would scorn me.

My sword whipped in my hands, almost without my commanding it, to deflect his blade away. And finally I was on the offensive. He staggered back, obviously surprised. His defensive was nearly as good as his offensive, but I could detect weaknesses in it. Of course, he seldom needed to use it.

There’s the Tigress,” someone said, or may have said. I was no longer sure. My footwork practice was finally playing off, and I stepped into a stance as I attacked, our blades two blurring bars biting at each other. They were whistling, though it sounded dull to my ears in the void I was in. I looked at the dark man facing me, so like the Rajah, and centred in on the white patch on his chest.

Suddenly it split in half, though I knew not how I’d made my blade get there. I staggered back, blinking, the numbness of the void leaving me.

“What use is basic protection alone to a woman,” I hissed, “if such as you ever decided to take advantage of them?”

Then I turned away.

The crowd that had gathered around us as we fought pressed against me now, but I pushed through them and reached the manor doors. Then, once inside the room that had been set aside for the ladies to freshen up, I sank down onto the bench.

His arrogance had reminded me so much of the Rajah. But even the Rajah’s insults were preferable to this. At least I had given the Rajah reason to think me uncouth.

And I still didn’t understand what had happened. I hadn’t beaten him, had I? Those last moments of the fight… I had felt different than I had ever felt before…

There had to be something wrong, I shouldn’t have beaten him.

 “La, I am so proud of you!” Maria exclaimed as she came in. “Finally, someone beat him. But I have never seen you fight so hard before.”

“I do not usually feel everything click so strongly,” I replied. I turned to her. “But he was infuriating me.”

“And that is why I so often lose!” Maria told me. “He makes me angry and I get distracted.”

“Well, then it is good it works exactly opposite on me,” I answered. Thoughtfully I washed myself down all over and changed back into my peacock blue dress.

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Duelling the Tigress: Chapter 16B (Why Polly?)

The Story So Far: Polly, kidnapped by an enchanter and his trainee and thrown in with a princess, discovers that she and her new companions are all are being threatened by a malevolent magical being known as a jadess. Can she get along with the arrogant enchanter long enough to figure out how to survive with a jadess after them? And … why does the jadess want Polly? Chapter 1 is here.

Chapter 16B: Duelling the Tigress

Every day after that I practised with rapiers, and my restlessness abated. Perhaps I had only been in need of exercise. Though while you were out in the sun sweating your brains out you felt like a wreck, afterwards a feeling of pleasant exhaustion crept over you, and you felt content. Or, after a bath at least. Rapier duelling got me too dirty, and court dress after court dress got wrecked.

“What do you do to your clothes?” Maria gasped, examining the ruined bundle that had been my tangerine robe. Then she picked up a striped gold and white silk. It wasn’t in much better shape.

She looked at me accusingly. “You’ve been rapier duelling, haven’t you?”

“How – how did you know?” I asked faintly.

“You think I don’t know a rapier’s work when I see it?” she snorted. “I’ve been waiting for the day when I wouldn’t be the only woman at court to practice rapiers with the earls, but little did I guess you’d be the one to join me!”

“I’m only learning,” I tried to explain.

“But you should have told me!” she exclaimed. “Now, today I’ll order you some proper duelling clothes, and hope they’ll be ready by tomorrow. You can’t keep going through dresses like this. And I’ll get you duelling undergarments; you can’t wear a girdle – if you haven’t realised by now.”

Then she dressed me in dusky yellow satin and began giving me tips on rapier fighting. It seemed she was really into duelling, she had continued her lessons in it past the level women were required to go, and even practised at court when she was there. She said she was still practising now. We’d taken two pokers from beside the fire and were clashing at each other when Stefan poked his head around the door.

“I heard lots of noise,” he explained. “And Paulina wants to know if you’re coming down for breakfast.”

“Oh!” said Maria. “We’d better hurry.”

That day, as I entered the throne room, Janeira came up to me excitedly.

“You’ve got to see what we’ve got!” she said. “Come with me.” And so I followed her to where the other women from Carmen’s group were standing.

“Ah Penelope, you’re here finally,” Carmen said as I came up. I winced inwardly. I was still not used to being called Penelope.

Then from behind her back she pulled out a long cloth bundle. I thought I knew what it was from the shape of it, but I untied the string anyway. Out fell a narrow rapier, of the very finest and strongest steel, suitably whippy (bendable, but not too much so), with a grip that moulded to my hand and a sturdy leather sheath. At the tip of the sheath a circlet of rubies glinted.

“Oh, but I couldn’t possibly accept…” I trailed off.

“This was my old blade,” Carmen replied, “I will lend it to you – it is made for a sword-maiden.”

Hesitantly I picked it up, then whistled it through the air.

“I’ll accept it then,” I told her quietly. She broke into a smile.

“You are quite a determined girl,” she said. “We see you out there, no matter how disapprovingly those pompous officers are whispering, like a ferocious tigress, and never giving up, no matter what those earls send you.”

“You could join me,” I offered.

“I would,” she said. “But what would the Rajah think?”

I should have known.

I would have liked to say my rapier-ship improved drastically because of that, but really every little improvement I made came because of grindingly hard work. But each morning Maria would take me down to the Peak’s entrance hall, where there was more room, and showed me her techniques and ‘the sword-maiden’s techniques’ (which, she would say contemptuously, those earls didn’t know a thing about). That helped me most, and every once in a while I could surprise the earl I was practising against with one of her tricks. Then they would laugh and say I reminded them of Maria DeAballah.

“She’s a cat, that one,” Earl Rojah told me, “As focused as anything when she fights, keeping her temper down for once; she’s not so hotly fierce as you. But if she’s a cat, then you’re a tigress.” And after that to tease me they’d call me the Tigress.

I never knew what Mandarine’s group thought of my duelling, or even what Cassandra thought for that matter. They all watched me with reserved faces, but they didn’t spite me at all when I had a rapier in my hand. Until I blew up at Mandarine one day and told her she could spite me as much as she wished because I’d never turn a rapier on a weaponless person, at which she just smiled and pulled up her skirt to reveal a rapier strapped to the bottom of her girdle.

“I just don’t want to end up duelling at court,” she told me acidly. “Unlike some people. It has never been – how shall I say – proper for a lady?”

All the women had rapiers on their girdles, I learned later, for what was the use of knowing rapier duelling if you didn’t have a rapier when you needed it? After that I strapped my rapier to my girdle too when I wasn’t using it. But at least Mandarine understood the gist of my speech, and no longer stayed silent when I was around. She wasn’t nearly as fun that way.

Cassandra had been bitter ever since I’d fought back against her, but she no longer mocked me, only watched me with a strange light in her eyes. So I settled for ignoring her. At least Carmen was happier that way.

My real friend at court was Janeira; we would walk together during our daily promenades and confide in each other. She didn’t seem to be as sure of herself as Carmen and Mandarine were, but she was slowly fitting in. She had a cutting way of remarking on the others’ manners, though, as if she had little use for other people’s feelings.

The clothes Maria had gotten me had taken a couple days to be ready, which meant a few more of my court dresses got wrecked (a scarlet one, a peacock blue, and a dull smoke grey I’d never really liked). But when they did arrive I found them entirely useful. They consisted of a pair of pants, too baggy to be real pants, but divided so they couldn’t be a real skirt, made of sturdy brown and coming to mid-calf. They were immeasurably cooler and easier to move in. The shirt was tight, with straps making an X across my chest and torso since I didn’t wear a girdle for duelling, and sleeves that ended like a cap over my shoulders.

Duelling seemed to break up the monotony of the court days, so that I looked forward to court more. And my friendships with the other ladies improved, as they cheered me on, and teasingly took up my nickname of ‘Tigress’. Well, at least it was better than Penelope.

When Maria and I practised rapiers in the entrance hall I don’t think the Enchanter knew we were there. I don’t think he even knew I’d taken up rapiers. He was seldom awake at that time, unless he was going to the Palace, and then he only came for breakfast at the last minute. But Stefan and Paulina sometimes watched, and though I offered to teach Paulina she shook her head. Radagast thought it was all a game and ran in circles around us as we fought, barking.

I still wore court dresses to court, and changed into my rapier-clothes before my lessons. I had to admit Maria had wonderful taste, and some of them I wore quite often, like the crimson one she’d bought me first. Then there was a peacock blue velvet, with white lacing down the front and white ruffles, which I wore on days I felt like being more subdued. My fanciest one was of silk, with a swirling skirt of all the colours in the rainbow stitched together with gold thread, with a bodice of gold and edged all along the hems with diamonds. Quite frankly I felt like a court jester in it; we were wearing the same colours. And then there was Maria’s favourite, a gown of turquoise with black buttons of jet and black flowers embroidered up my bodice.

“It makes your eyes look so big and blue,” she said. But Casper didn’t like it, and he told me so quite rudely. Perhaps it was because it was Maria’s favourite.

But my rapier-clothes were indisputably the most comfortable clothes I’d ever owned. I thought if I could bring them back to Angaria I would, except people would look at me funny if I wore them there.

I was wearing them and sitting on the fence of the practice yard one day, taking a short break and sipping water from a water-skin. There was a slight breeze, thankfully, and I let it blow the wisps of hair off my face. I didn’t put my hair up for duelling anymore, and instead just tied back my hair with ribbon like I always had in Angaria. In front of me the earls fought back and forth, the steady clash! clash! of their rapiers rhythmic on my ears. Earl Seanit came up to me.

“Are you waiting for a partner?” he asked.

“No, just getting a sip of water,” I replied. “But I’ll duel with you if you want.”

I picked my rapier up and took up my stance against him. He faced me, we did a quick ceremonial bow, then each did a jab-thrust towards each other’s rapier, which was what usually started off the match. I concentrated on blocking his stabs, on the defensive as I usually was at first. Earl Seanit knew this and pressed hard with his attacks. His aim was probably to prevent me from ever being able to go on the offensive.

“You’ve got to stop being so predictable,” he panted.

“Oh yes?” I said, and made my move. A quick step to the left to fake him out, then around him to the right, and my rapier almost whipped through his defence to the white patch on his chest. He grinned.

“A touch faster next time,” he said. “You’ve got to work on you foot-work.”

I nodded. I knew.

Suddenly there was a pause and he hesitated in his movement, and I lunged forward to nick his white patch in half before realising what he was looking at. Then I turned, and I saw the Rajah behind me, with a gleaming rapier in hand.

“If you would permit, Earl Seanit,” he said to us, “I would like to see myself how the Lady Penelope everyone is talking about fights.”

I gaped at him. I couldn’t fight the Rajah! What if I hurt him or something?

Earl Seanit smiled and put a hand on my shoulder.

“ ‘Luck,” he said in a low voice, “But I think you can take him. Just don’t let the fact he’s Rajah overwhelm you. He can take care of himself.”

So I faced off with the Rajah, my hands both clasped tightly around the handle of my rapier to give a bow, then switched to my right-hand to give the quick jab-thrust. He surprised me by the quickness of his, and I barely turned it aside. I realised with some shock that the Rajah was left-handed.

He was skilled, and I realised my normal tactics wouldn’t do. I got stuck in some places and was forced to be creative, concentrating hard on where I stepped so I could point my rapier where I wanted it to be. He’s probably duelled with Maria DeAballah hundreds of times, I realised, and knows all her tricks. Okay, so I was in a bit of a tight spot.

I bit my bottom lip and retorted his blade, and whipped my rapier in a sort of twisty whistle at him. He turned it aside, his dark eyes intense, his hawkish face calm and focused. I whirled out of the way of his blade just in time. My rapier vibrated in my hands.

Just one more jab, I thought, but I didn’t have him. From nowhere he was able to make his rapier whip up to mine.

“So, I finally get to try my skill against the little Tigress,” he said, then grunted as my blade swung at him. “Earl Parfin was right, you do learn quickly. But you leave openings…” He thrust.

“Can’t expect me to catch them all,” I gasped, retreating a step. He followed up with another attack. I ignored the drip of sweat running down my nose and concentrated on the person in front of me.

“Most Exalted Rajah, I must ask you to forgive any hurt I inflict on your royal person,” I told him. I made a botched attack, and was just barely able to stop his retort.

“Do you think you can hurt me?” he asked, amused.

“Just wait and see,” I hissed back.

And then I really bit down. Sometimes when I fought it was as if something inside me clicked, and there was nothing else in my world except my rapier and my opponent’s, and the stances and moves just flowed out of me. All around me I could feel heat, the heat of the Chaldean sun baking on the flagstones, the heat of my exertion as I moved, the heat of my concentration, the heat in my mouth as I bit down and lunged…

The Rajah staggered back with a bit of a stunned expression on his face, his white patch dangling off his chest in two ragged halves. I caught myself and let my rapier arm drop to my side, staring.

“So,” he said. “I see now why you are called a Tigress.”

Feeling eyes on my back I turned. And there was Casper, leaning on the fence and watching me with that typical, irritating and amused smile of his.

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Rapier Against Rapier: Chapter 16A (Why Polly?)

Not drawn by me, sadly. (CC0 1.0 Universal)

Just to be clear, nothing in this story is meant to represent reality.

The Story So Far: Polly, kidnapped by an enchanter and his trainee and thrown in with a princess, discovers that she and her new companions are all are being threatened by a malevolent magical being known as a jadess. Can she get along with the arrogant enchanter long enough to figure out how to survive with a jadess after them? And … why does the jadess want Polly? Chapter 1 is here.

Chapter 16A: Rapier against Rapier

 “Where were you?” Paulina asked as soon as I stumbled in the door. “I was beginning to get worried!”

“I went to see the market,” I said. I covered up a yawn. After a long day at court, and then a walk through the market, I was tired. “I hope nobody went looking for me.”

“No, but I was going to ask Stefan to,” she replied.

I smiled at her. “I’m flattered you care that much.”

I had some supper, vegetable pie made by Paulina (with just a touch too much salt for my taste, thought I didn’t tell her) and went to bed. But I couldn’t sleep. I lay there for quite a while, staring up at the canopy over my bed, and alternately opening and closing the shutter to let more moonlight in or to block it out.

I’m sure that gypsy was surprised when I mentioned Casper had a diamond coat, I thought. He knows something. I wondered what it meant.

And I would have set out to ask the gypsy about it the next day if I hadn’t remembered he’d said he was leaving Araba.

I was restless at court, and paced so much the other ladies asked me if anything was wrong. I said nothing, for it something was I could not put my finger on it. Perhaps I was just bored with court and the same routine day after day.

So one day, while the ladies of the court were watching the earls duel under the hot Chaldean sun, I picked up a rapier, with both hands between my palms, and held it straight up in front of me as I face them.

“Why don’t you teach me to use this?” I asked the earls. They all stopped to look at me. In one long loop I threw the rapier up, so it came spiralling back down to the ground towards me, and allowed it to stick tip-down in the dirt.

“Careful!” Earl Parfin gasped, taking an impulsive step towards me. “Lady, it’s sharp.”

Of course I knew it was sharp. I’d tested it with the tip of my finger, and drew it away with a red stain appearing on it. The rapier was long and thin, a needle-like piece of metal that was almost whippy, and its handle was fitted to the hand and covered with leather. Experimentally I waved it back and forth, listening to its whistle.

“Do you not know how to use it?” Lady Carmen asked. Her green eyes were surprised. I lowered the rapier.

“No,” I said, “Do you?”

“All noblewomen do,” she replied. “Know the basics, at least. In case – they ever have need to protect themselves. Would you allow me?” She held out her hand.

I gave the rapier, and she held it confidently. Then she began a brief sparring march with an earl, and she was good, if not as practised as them. They seemed to know that, and intentionally slowed their strokes.

“I’ve only ever used my fists,” I told her, “For protection, and it’s been a long time since I’ve used them. Unless you count…” I glanced shamefully at Cassandra, remembering the brawl in the throne room. Perhaps that was why Carmen and Mandarine hadn’t used fists when they fought, because when Chaldean women were seriously fighting they used rapiers.

“Does it work?” Carmen asked.

“Quite often,” I replied, “If you punch in the right places, and with the right strength.”

Then I turned back to the earls. “But my question was, can you teach me?”

They looked from the rapier, and back to me. “I wouldn’t want to be responsible for any…” one started, but Earl Laftan and Earl Seanit, whom I knew quite well, stepped forward.

“We would be honoured to teach you,” Earl Seanit said, with a half-bow. But there was a mischievous glint in his eyes.

Rapier duelling, I soon discovered, was the hottest and most sweatiest work there could be. And I hadn’t even started real duelling yet, just the basic forms, exercises and rules. Girdles were the absolute worst thing to wear for it. After a couple of minutes I excused myself and took it off, along with my pinkish-orange ametrine belt, necklace, bracelets and earrings, but my tangerine robe I could do nothing about. I resigned myself to getting it covered in sweat, dirt, and blood when I nicked myself. As I soon learned, my wrists weren’t used to holding a rapier, and weren’t strong enough to control it properly.

I looked up from my complicated move and twist manoeuvre to see what the earls wore for duelling. Each of them still had on a suit jacket and their cravat, but they had wide baggy trousers on instead of suit pants, which were much more suitable for getting caked in sweat and mud, and they had taken off their maroon capes. Their jackets looked dusty, but they seemed more adept at keeping it down than I was. On their left side, over their heart, they each wore a white patch which, if ripped by their opponent’s rapier, indicated a kill. Rapiers were used for protection, but when practising and in tournaments, they didn’t fight to the death.

But the wonderful Chaldean hairstyle for men, which Casper had adopted, was absolutely unsuited to duelling. Their pompadours came undone almost immediately, and if they kept anything in them as Casper had said, they’d taken it out beforehand, anticipating this. Dust and sweat got into it, making it hang over their foreheads in greasy strands, but I’m sure my hair couldn’t have looked much worse.

About the only good thing about having my hair piled up and high on the crown of my head was that it was kept out of my face. Otherwise it was much too lumpy, and kept falling out. But my! was that Chaldean sun ever hot. I could just feel it reflecting down into the rapier courtyard and baking off the flagstones beneath my feet.

The skirt of my dress got shredded, for whenever I moved either my rapier or my opponent’s got caught in it, tearing it. It was a good thing I had under-drawers on, or else it would’ve been positively indecent.

The women on the sidelines all laughed and cheered me on, giving me pointers from their own experience. I think it amused them to see a clumsy Angarian like me attempt the graceful but dangerous rapier dance. A few of them looked almost like they wanted to join me, but I guess it wasn’t considered proper for a lady to show off her rapier talents at court, only men. Which made me wonder what I was doing.

Carmen even told me as much afterwards, but added, “It’s all right for you, of course, since you’ve never learned. But I was surprised when you asked them to teach you.”

“So shall I keep on?” I said.

“Oh yes!” she replied. “I’d love for you to learn. But under any other circumstances… well, we find it strange. Though you aren’t exactly a conformist, are you?”

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Black Eye! Chapter 14C (Why Polly?)

This chapter finds Polly continuing in her attempts to foil the jadess’s plans at the Palace.  Polly, while impersonating the princess, has been kidnapped by an enchanter and his trainee… and meets the very princess she was impersonating. It is revealed they all are being threatened by a malevolent magical being known as a jadess. Can she get along with the arrogant enchanter long enough to figure out how to survive with a jadess after them? And … why does the jadess want Polly? Chapter 1 is here.

Chapter 14 C: Black Eye!

 And that was how I came to be viewed as being part of Carmen’s group. It rather improved things to have a side you belonged to. It seemed they’d been curious about me before, but hadn’t been sure if I’d run off to Mandarine’s side or not. So I spent some of my days describing Angaria to them, and they told me more about Chaldea. Now that they’d actually unbent a little, they actually explained a bit about how the court society functioned. They re-introduced me to all the earls again too.

“Isn’t Enchanter Raleigh rich and famous, though?” Clio asked when I’d finished describing my life as a flower girl to her. I bit my lip – maybe I should have left that last description out. Then I shrugged.

“He’s nothing much in Angaria, is he?” I said. “And I’d never known him very well until I visited him.”

Fortunately, Clio accepted this.

Janeira had chosen Carmen’s side too, mostly because I had. We would talk a lot together. Our agreement was that this whole rivalry business would be over if the Rajah would just stand up and actually pick someone, but the Rajah did not seem inclined to do so.

Mandarine’s group avoided me now, or shot barbed remarks at me. But I did not really mind this, I was quite good at shooting barbed remarks back, and then Carmen’s group would giggle behind their fans and congratulate me. They all accepted me, except, it seemed Cassandra.

“She’s just still sour the Enchanter jilted her,” Rianne told me. “She was rather proud before, and no one had done that to her before. I think she fancies you ought to apologise.

“For his behaviour?” I asked, and gave a little snort. “I’m not responsible for – er – my cousin.”

“She seems to think you are,” Rianne replied.

And Cassandra did seem to think so. She tried her best to make my life miserable for me. Luckily Carmen told her to quit it, and the others in the groups protected me from her. But she did not give up.

“Can’t you be more graceful, cousin of the Enchanter?” she mocked when I tripped on the stairs. She’d never call me by name, I was only ‘cousin of the Enchanter’. I shot her a dirty look back.

The Rajah seemed to notice me very little, which was just fine by me. The others all thought up every manner of outrageous plot to get his attention, but never to much avail. I was content to stay in the background and keep an eye on him. Slowly I was perfecting my technique.

I hope you’re frustrated, blasted jadess, I thought.

I was not much at the Magician’s Peak anymore. Only at breakfast times and dinner, otherwise I was at court. Paulina took over the making of the meals, and she seemed much happier, perhaps because she could get out now, and went to the market every day with Stefan. Stefan tried to keep an eye on Casper too, since he was the one most at risk from the jadess, but Casper was not easy to keep an eye on. He said he wasn’t going to let the jadess interfere with his life.

“He takes too many risks around her,” Stefan said. “He always has.”

“Even when he rescued us, right?” I asked.

He nodded. “Yes. I insisted on coming too, or else who knows what would have happened if the jadess found him there? Even though we’d been able to keep an eye on her with the silver screen beforehand.”

Casper was still trying to fix the silver screen, but without much luck. He’d order Rubion silver again, but it would take months to get here by caravan.

He teased me when he saw me in my court clothes, calling me ‘little Chaldean court lady’ and other absurd titles. I think it amused him to see me dressed up like that. I certainly didn’t look anything like myself.

I often wished I could just stay at the peak I missed the way things had been before, just me and Paulina, and the enchanters. It was not because I could boss people around, whatever Casper said. I seldom bossed people, though I liked to annoy him. Paulina and Stefan would’ve listened to me too readily.

But I missed cooking meals, and teaching Paulina. Sometimes meals would come out a little strange because she’d been experimenting, and I wished I could give her tips. I wanted to wear the plain, comfortable dresses I’d sewn, and I never wanted to see my girdle again. But regardless, I had to go on.

I was going to get the jadess for this, someday.

Once in a while, though, it was kind of fun to pretend to be upper crust, to parade around in my finery, and to rub elbows with lords and earls. This was not something I would ever get to do in Angaria.

Carmen tried to teach me the art of flirting, but I resisted her efforts until she gave up. The earls weren’t put off by my straightforwardness, but Carmen lamented that this way the Rajah would pay no attention to me. Honestly, sometimes she reminded me of Gretchen.

The earls said they put up with me because there were no other blonds at court, and we became friends; I would tease them, and they would heckle me back. But if the Rajah would come up, with a puzzled expression on his kingly face, I would retreat to the background. It was bad enough I had to be at court and look like I was chasing him, it would be worse if I actually made a fool of myself attempting to talk to him. The earls all asked me where in the world I thought I was disappearing to, and that I’d never get the Rajah’s attention that way, but I would just shrug.

Sometimes I think the earls resented that the ladies were all paying attention to the Rajah, and not to them. I told them all the ladies would all look to back to them again once the Rajah chose his bride, but they would just look at me with a sour expression on their face and say the Rajah was never going to choose, at this rate. Then they would go off and practice their rapier-fighting, to demonstrate their bravery. Often there were tournaments, and then we would all turn out to watch. The Rajah would compete too sometimes, and he won quite a bit, though not too much more than anybody else. It gave me a thrill to watch those long, narrow bits of steel clash and stab against each other.

It was the middle of summer in Chaldea, and it was hot. I wondered how the earls could stand rapier-fighting in the baking hot sun. I wasn’t doing anything but watching, and I felt faint. The only relief was in the cool, shady stone of the Palace, though often by late afternoon it would heat up too. It was nicest in the morning, when it was cool inside the Palace, and pleasantly warm outside.

Mandarine would actually faint, though I wasn’t sure if that was because she tied her girdle so tight, or she just liked everyone hovering around her. It didn’t work too well on the Rajah though, if it was a ploy: he would just wave his hand and order his servants to bring her water and fan her.

The ladies on Mandarine’s side were Lady Aurelia and Daina, Vianna, Suzanne, Delia, Yasmine, Marcia, Allaina, Nadia and Maylin. They did their best to spite us, and we did our best to spite them. On Carmen’s side were me, Janeira, Rianne and Clio, and Junina, Andrea, Indira, Malope, Hallia, Persis and Cerina. And, of course, Cassandra. She was as bitter as ever.

“Didn’t the Enchanter teach you manners?” she’d ask every time I made a mistake. “That’s the way we do it in Chaldea.”

My goodness, no wonder Casper had jilted her.

“Who said I cared how you do it in Chaldea?” I finally snapped back.

“Well, you do our best to dress like us,” she replied. “Pale-haired wench.”

The thing was, I couldn’t really insult her, for she really was beautiful. Definitely more beautiful than me. Otherwise I could have thought up equally cutting remarks about her, but with her flawless skin and bit, dark eyes I could think of nothing to criticize in her looks. I knew Carmen didn’t like us fighting, but it wasn’t her quarrel, and thankfully she didn’t interfere. I thought I could understand how she felt about Mandarine now.

One day I could stand it no longer. Cassandra pushed me just a little bit too far as we were standing one morning in the throne room, and I launched into her. I didn’t bother with little slaps and hair-pulling, like Carmen and Mandarine, but fought as I’d had to fight to protect myself from bullies when I’d still been young in Angaria. I hadn’t used it in a long time, and I was surprised I still remembered. Cassandra was surprised too, at first, then she fought back with equal vigour.

“Girls, stop it!” Carmen shrieked, horrified. I didn’t have to look at Mandarine to know she’d be smirking the spectacle. But I didn’t care about her.

“Lady Penelope!” It was one of the earls. “Ladies, stop that!” He tried to get in our way and got punched in the face.

I almost had Cassandra pinned, but then she elbowed me in the side, hard, and stepped on my foot at the same time. I gasped for breath. She elbowed me when I had precious little breath already, my lacing were tied so tight. Girdles were not made to fight in.

“Cat fight,” I heard another lord drawl. If he’d tried to interfere I would have scratched his eyes out. Luckily for him, he didn’t.

Then I could hear the Rajah calling for order, but I ignored him. Cassandra paused when she heard, which I took advantage of, then she ignored him too. I could hear horrified gasps echo around the room. But I was too busy to attend right then, Cassandra had kicked me in shins.

“You irritating little – flea!” I gasped, as she hung onto my back and draggled my hair. I’d bit back a vulgar Angarian insult just in time. We were at court.

I swung around and hit her with a rather off-centred punch. But she let go anyway.

Then suddenly I felt a hand on my shoulders, lifting me up, and I was dangling off the ground. Looking beside me I saw the Rajah, his dark eyes blazing with fury. The soldier holding me flanked his left side, and on his right one held Cassandra.

“Do you not listen to your ruler?” he said. I squirmed and the soldier let me fall to the floor. I rolled over to look up at him. He was far more interesting in his fury.

Beside me Cassandra was quivering. She was probably afraid she’d be kicked out of court, and then she lost all chance with the Rajah.

“Answer me!” he said thunderously. “Do you know what I say?”

“Y – yes, sire,” Cassandra stammered.

“How could we not, since you’re yelling so loud?” The words just found a way out of my mouth. I heard an anguished gasp from Carmen.

“Oh, you – blasted women!” he yelled. He stormed around the throne room and threw a stone crock to the ground, rather like Maria DeAballah had in the entrance hall of the Peak, except this crock looked bigger and heavier. The Rajah must be tremendously strong.

Damage control, damage control… time to think of something polite to say…

“I’m sorry, sire,” I told him. “Such behaviour is not fitting for a throne room. I should have taken it outside.”

He looked incensed. ‘Whatever practice you have in Angaria, young lady, you should not be fighting in court at all! Now, there may be some bad examples,” he glared furiously at Carmen and Mandarine, “But THAT IS NO EXCUSE!”

“Of course, sire,” I replied.

I realised I was goading him like I did Casper. He was reacting rather more satisfactorily than the Enchanter did, but I wasn’t sure how much more his Chaldean temper could take. I shut my mouth.

I did not trust myself to say a word as I let his tirade wash over me. He could probably see I wasn’t terrified by the look in my eyes, though Cassandra probably satisfied him. She was cowering on the floor.

“You do not hold proper respect for me,” he accused, his eyes shooting sparks at me.

“Oh the contrary, my lord,” I answered. “The higher fury you get into, the more respect I have. You might ask Casper how that works.”

“Oh, get out of my sight,” he yelled back. “And I’ll tell you if I’ll ever let you back into it!”

I hurried out of the room and down the hall, into the women’s room. I looked at myself in the mirror. Two black eyes bloomed spectacularly in my face, between strands of draggled hair. I sighed and began cleaning myself up.

Janeira found me there a while later.

“My goodness,” she said. “I’ve never seen the Rajah get into such a high fury before. He’s usually so emotionless.”

“Yeah, well, lucky me,” I said, “For managing to make him show emotion.”

She looked at me suddenly, then laughed. I could tell she thought I was crazy, but she didn’t seem to care.

“Well, Cassandra was spitting mad after you left,” she told me. “It looks like you’ve started another court rivalry.”

“With Cassandra, or with the Rajah?” I muttered back.
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